LET ME  (Rhyme)

LET ME (Rhyme)

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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dreams

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Let me...


          kiss you now like it's forever
          hug you like there's no end, never
          hold you like when two hearts entwined
          You and I will seal the bind.


          give my love, my heart, my soul
          show my emotions, give my all
          unveil myself and enjoy the night
          You and I will take the flight.


          wake up with a morning smile
          look at you sleeping so fine
          touch your face and whisper this:
        "Thank you for that evening kiss."


          prepare the table just for us
         set your tie without a rush
         kiss you goodbye just for the day
        Things that make me happy and gay.


          touch the sign of our great love
          another angel, as white as dove
          dream the songs that I will sing
A perfect life, that's what she'll bring.


          enjoy this dream in my sleep
          hold the things for me to keep
          let them stay here in my heart
Tomorrow I'll dream another part...



© 2014 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Photo from: Google images

Rhyme. A rhyming poem has the repetition of the same or similar sounds of two or more words, often at the end of the line.

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Let me...
tell you that this is a lovely love poem written from the heart. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks, dk =)
Absolutely beautiful and touching. Great job :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks, SA, .:)
This one is BEAUTIFUL and spellbinding! Captures why we search so hard, wish for so long, pray over and over to the heavens...and why sometimes we turn to dreams to complete us.

Thanks for sharing

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks for spending your time here, A. I always appreciate your visit. =)
Wow. I just saw this one Dhaye. Sp passionate and touching...Awesome...:)................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Sami.
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)....................
A beautiful poem for love. I like the repetition. Made the poem stronger and the desire come alive. No weakness in the amazing poem of love.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks, CP.
Very tender and romantic, Dhaye! Kumusta na?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Okay naman, sis. How about you? Kwentuhan mo ako via PM para may mabasa naman ako mamayang lunch tim.. read more
I felt like I was on the roof top...
and hearing this from another...
and yelling the words at the top of their lungs...
just has the live feel and just keeps at you...
as a reader...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Glen. =)
Glen Yumang Manese

10 Years Ago

you're welcome...I'm feeling a bit better from surgery and the complications with bronchitis...just .. read more
Beautifully romantic, a soft and tender piece...enjoyed :) x

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Tia. =)
Lovely sentiment, something most of us dream of at least at one time or another. Well said.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Eddie.

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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