EVERY MOMENT

EVERY MOMENT

A Chapter by Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)
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Just a simple expression of my gratefulness

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Every moment
I want
to see you
Hear your words
See your smile


I want to see you
In every color of your ink
Those words that show
Every piece of your heart
Yes, your heart...
A kind of heart that shines
In every corner of this room
It is the light
It is my light


I want to feel your touch
Through the gentleness of your words
I want to feel that you care
Through the voice that I hear
From those beautiful songs
That echo in this room
You are the light
You are my light...


In every moment.



© 2014 Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)


Author's Note

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)
I am blessed. I am happy. I am grateful.


"Things are never quite as scary when you've got a best friend."
----Bill Watterson


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Is the best friend GOD? Such a wonderful friendship expressed between a human and God if we think spiritually. I viewed that way and was blessed. Your description in the 'Author's Note' made me think of what you meant. We can be happy materially but gratefulness and blessedness are spiritual and a matter of heart and soul.

Loved it, Dhaye... your write ups are just amazing.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Chiradeep.



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Is the best friend GOD? Such a wonderful friendship expressed between a human and God if we think spiritually. I viewed that way and was blessed. Your description in the 'Author's Note' made me think of what you meant. We can be happy materially but gratefulness and blessedness are spiritual and a matter of heart and soul.

Loved it, Dhaye... your write ups are just amazing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Chiradeep.
Romantic to the bones. In my library...:)........................

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Sami Khalil

5 Years Ago

OK. Friend or boyfriend...lol...You are welcome...
Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

.............. =)
Sami Khalil

5 Years Ago

:)......................
Dhaye do you want praise or critique ?

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

Tse! Bola-bola, kwek-kwek, fish ball...samahan mo pa ng Coke para may panulak. LOL.
NeiL ArandA

5 Years Ago

Novelty is a chess word for originality and finesse . I could not find any weakness on your lines. I.. read more
Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

My readers are too kind and I know they will appreciate this. If only I could always tell how gratef.. read more
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Stunningly romantic… being a hopeless romantic myself I throughly enjoyed this poem.

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

Thanks for reminding me...I'm a hopeless romantic. LOL
Thanks for dropping by!
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

5 Years Ago

Anytime, always a pleasure.
Beautiful and hopeful desire of love in the poem. I like the strong scent to know and to hold someone near. No weakness in the amazing poem of love.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

Thanks, CP.
Deems fit for a song...
with the style this is written...
the inverted play with:

You are the light
You are my light...

seems you are as you say in the Author's note with this write...

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

Thanks, Glen.
Glen Yumang Manese

5 Years Ago

you're welcome...feeling better by the day...thank God...
Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

Glad you're okay, Glen. God bless!
That was quite lovely, and certainly your joy is evident in this poem. Very uplifting.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

Thanks, Eddie.=)
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This is gorgeous, I absolutely love the lyrical fluidity throughout this write and
the eloquent loving, honest theme, imagery you penned here...

my favorite stanzas are the second and the last. Stunning poem, Dhaye...
thanks for sharing! :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much, BJ. =)
b.

5 Years Ago

you're very welcome, and i forgot to add...that i'm very happy for you...shine on! :)

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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