I SMILE  (Free Verse)

I SMILE (Free Verse)

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
"

the real one

"



After falling seven times
Here I am standing once more
Making the next steps
Performing the fine moves
Keeping on grip
My most precious gem
Which I don't want to lose
Not anytime
Never

And as I sigh with glory
I faced at the rising sun
And as I blink my eyes
I see those wings once more
And I smile...



© 2014 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Free Verse (vers libre) Poetry is written in either rhyme or unrhymed lines that have no set fixed metrical pattern.

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ahh, mother and I, smile as ever
for we, never want to lose that forever
even it is meant just for the moment
but it lasted in the heart's beating movement.

coming back with many smiles
even if the road maybe far, a million miles.

mother it is best to smile away
than to stay in despare, so we sway the boogie ways...

- faceless being




Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

LOL. Am I your mother? I'm not that old to be your mother, nor you as young to be my child... you're.. read more



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ahh, mother and I, smile as ever
for we, never want to lose that forever
even it is meant just for the moment
but it lasted in the heart's beating movement.

coming back with many smiles
even if the road maybe far, a million miles.

mother it is best to smile away
than to stay in despare, so we sway the boogie ways...

- faceless being




Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

LOL. Am I your mother? I'm not that old to be your mother, nor you as young to be my child... you're.. read more
It isnt the times you fell that define you it is the fact you got back up

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Tate. =)
A Book With A Rare Smile ....
I'm intrigue with the usage of number seven here. Do you know that God's favorite number ?
Seven really represents perfection. I like the simplicity and honesty of this piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NeiL ArandA

10 Years Ago

Ok ... travel mercy ...
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Yes, I believe that #7 is a perfect number...It's an irony- "I fall seven times"...means even when.. read more
NeiL ArandA

10 Years Ago

Well there is always Someone there that is Perfect to make that perfect catch for you. :)
You are the rising sun of yourself to the heights of glory...A wonderful write...:)................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Wow. Best wishes...:)..................
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thank you and best wishes to you also. Have a nice day ahead!
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You too...:)..............

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Added on March 1, 2014
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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

Philippines



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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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