IN MY DREAMS (Free Verse)

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I believe in forever
Hoping that one day
My dreams would come true
Somehow
Relying only on the voice of my heart
I dreamed of a thousand mornings
As ours
Many sunshine and moonlights
To be our soft blankets
As I embrace you tightly
Like holding you forever in my arms

There is a place
Where everything is fair
Everything is possible
No more tears of gloom
But only smiles and laughter
And only you and I
There I can hold your hand
As I stay next to you
And smile on the next phases
Of my life
With you beside me
And yes,

It's always in my dreams.

Author's Note

Special credits to: Neil Aranda's "There is a Place" for letting me use a line same as in the said piece.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"There is a place
Where everything is fair
Everything is possible
No more tears of gloom
But only smiles and laughter"

A good description on heaven even in your dream to be with him for eternity. Soft imagery and sentiments in your words...Bravo.............

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...........

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh wow, that is a real heart melting poem. So much tenderness and romances flows from it that is is very intoxicating.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, cowboy. Having a writer's block again so I'm just re-featuring an old work.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well glad you did cause I missed this gem of yours when it was posted.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

............. =)

[Chiradeep Patra]

Beautiful and fabulous write up. The lucidity in your writing is just commendable. The expressions are superb and very understood. Thanks for such a great share. God Bless you and keep making us crave for more of your works.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you so much, Chiradeep.

[Eddie Davis]

I'm a firm believer in hope and this poem is filled with optimism. Sometimes our dreams are where we spend much of our lives, but thank God for the power of dreams, and the courage to make those dreams into a reality. Very nicely done.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you so much, Eddie.

[Blue]

Ate, one of the sweetest poems of yours I've read. It's delicate and soft. A bliss to read. One of your best, I think.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Blue. You're one of the sweetest persons here. =)

[Mel Lisa]

beautiful words and expressions. enjoyed this piece and the beautiful music:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, Melecia.

[PurpleQuartz]

This had a beautiful fairytale quality to it. It was transcending.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, Purple Q. =)

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

You have out-done yourself with this poem Dhaye! It's so beautiful and emotional, filled with every emotion possible - sadness, hope and more.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Wow! Thanks, Michael. I appreciate your visit today.

Actually, I went there in your page to look for a new post...but there's none. LOL.

[Michael (Letters and Lifelines)]

Lol i've been a little busy but i should be posting something soon.

[Tom]

Crestfallen indeed, but dreams can and do come true so never give up !

A touching forlorn poem yet with a sanguine overtone, splendid indeed my friend !

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Wow! How I missed those kind words from you, Tom. Thank you so much!

[Tom]

My pleasure !

[gabrielle]

Dhaye, most of the time your work always remind me of a song. Reading this piece made me hum Les Miserables’ “I Dreamed a Dream” and “On my Own” because the songs’ concepts are somewhat similar to your theme.

I think that our ability to imagine or to dream is an attribute that help us to be flexible in times of adversities. Very well-penned.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Dreaming is one of hobbies. Hehe. "There You'll Be" is one of my fave songs and it is my muse in this piece. =)
Thanks, Gab.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Dreaming is one of my hobbies. LOL. "There You'll Be" is one of my fave songs and it is my muse in this piece. =)
Thanks, Gab.