IN MY LIFE (Rhyme)

Another piece inspired by a song...

Author's Note

Photo from: Photobucket
Music: I Want To Know What Love Is by Mariah Carey




Rhyme. A rhyming poem has the repetition of the same or similar sounds of two or more words, often at the end of the line.

Reviews

[Rachelle]

love laced with melancholy…. what's a girl to do? Sisters talaga tayo…..

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, sis. :)

[Eddie Davis]

This was beautiful, but like many of your poems, there was an underlying hint of sadness. You are an amazing poet, Dhaye. "Picks my motes" was pure gold! That phrase will stay in my head for a long time.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks a lot, Eddie. =)

[Tom]

This has a catchy flow and rhyme, I could see how it could be put to music to make a sweet, love song!

A fine poem, full of devotion and enjoying enlightenment !

[Aaron Flood]

There is a ribbon of love through your work that is strengthened by hope and is uplifting.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you so much. I look forward to reading your works, too. =)

[Sami Khalil]

In the rough and tough of our lives, romance gives hope and light our ways from the darkness of nights. Sweet sentiments make life duarble and the future lays in the promises of the heart...A splendid poem from your pen...:)..............

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, Sami. =)

[Sami Khalil]

Yu are welcome...:)...................