SAVE ME

SAVE ME

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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a poem I made for a contest in the other site

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Too many roads I have to cross

And too much pain I have to bear

Too many seas I have to sail

Now there’s one mask I have to wear.

 

Sing me a song that lifts me up

Paint a picture that speaks up, too

Tell me the word that’s not too sharp

I only want the  best from you.

 

Give me a flow’r with gentle scent

Save the petals to gain my strength…







© 2014 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

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A song that is sung when the darkness begins to overtake the light. We need our friends to sing a lilting melody at times like that....a song that will make us believe tomorrow will be a brighter day. Such a song and the companionship of a friend can make a person feel strong and happy again. What an inspirational and uplifting write this is, Dh. On what other site do you post poetry? Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

I have Writers-network, Poetry.com, Poetfreak, Wikinut, but this piece was a contest piece at starli.. read more
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks for reading, Lydi. =)



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Very sweet and some what romantic with the Savior.How do you add music to the poems?

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thank you, W. If you want to add music to any piece, you should open a tab for You Tube, open the mu.. read more
W R Stowe

6 Years Ago

Ok thank you so much
A sweet song Dhaye, very uplifting read, I'll be back when I need a booster shot. ;-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Fri. Glad you dropped by. =)
We all need a lifeline at some point in life, when dread/despair seems to creep in and slowly take over. I enjoyed this, as I believe all can relate. Beautifully written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thank you for dropping by.
Very soft, fragile, yet wary. Nice meter, good rhythm. very good.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Anne.
A song that is sung when the darkness begins to overtake the light. We need our friends to sing a lilting melody at times like that....a song that will make us believe tomorrow will be a brighter day. Such a song and the companionship of a friend can make a person feel strong and happy again. What an inspirational and uplifting write this is, Dh. On what other site do you post poetry? Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

I have Writers-network, Poetry.com, Poetfreak, Wikinut, but this piece was a contest piece at starli.. read more
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks for reading, Lydi. =)
Sing me a song that lifts me up
Great write, message is so clear and well projected, poet's request all to be tender and caring , enjoyed

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A nice, hopeful poem that asks for the best and reflects your skill at crafting poetry. Well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Eddie. =)
Very pretty and bright...so nice among all the doom and gloom.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Why doom...thank you for dropping by, Aaron!
Aaron Flood

7 Years Ago

Just had read so many poems of negative descent...this was a nice change.
you penned this in ten minutes?! you did an amazing job here, dhaye. the last stanza is very meaningful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

gabrielle

7 Years Ago

welcome dhaye...anadami mo talaga nagagawa..
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Quantity...not quality? LOL. Buti sa iyo with quality talaga. Pa-sweet at pa-cute lang naman poems k.. read more
gabrielle

7 Years Ago

I think that this kind of writing is your forte dhaye. You can write it easily without sacrificing t.. read more
Love is like a rolling sea...............embracing the sands so close to thee....................walk by my side and let the world be................take my hand and come swim with me.............

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Wow! I like that little gem. Thank you for reading my piece. =)
paul sal.....

7 Years Ago

The world is full of shining crystals if only our blind eyes could see...................Thank you f.. read more

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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