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YOUR FAITH

YOUR FAITH

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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Just a little craft I made for a challenge using the 5 words- bellow, below, shinned, shone, and dwell.

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Don't be afraid to show your feeling
Get out and bellow if you want
Show them the seeds that dwell in your being
But do not express them in a rant

Do not put your self-image below
Nobody would love you except you
They will never see something will grow
Those who shinned away from you

Keep in your heart that faith, my dear
That one that had shone here and everywhere!






© 2014 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
A little craft for my 'Voice of Faith' collection

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Dhaye, this piece reminded me of Desiderata. It has calming effect on me.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Gab.
We cannot please everyone and we shouldn't, what matters is what your heart wants, those who love you will support you no matter what. A very uplifting and posiitively inspiring poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, cowboy!
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

7 Years Ago

You are welcome young lady.
As for the challenge and the rhyme scheme also...
I see this gives more than expected...
the way this comes out with inspiration...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Glen.
Glen Yumang Manese

7 Years Ago

you're welcome...
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Pax
Your faith is ever stronger like our good friend and brother Neil... keep it up my pretty friend...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

O, sige na nga. Sa hinaba-haba ng kunsumisyon...doon din pala ang tuloy. LOL
Pax

7 Years Ago

hahaha, okay naman talaga yun, LOL, so meaning walang ice cream... ;(
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Hmnn...sounds like we both avoid to think (you) and to give (I). LOL. So, quits na talaga. Ha ha!
Splendid thoughts you conjured here Dhaye. You seems to have acquired the taste for spiritual poems and piece. Keep going ...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Neil. Your kind words are appreciated here. =)

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Added on March 30, 2014
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Tags: faith, belief, poem, trust, God

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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