EVEN IF    (Quatrain)

EVEN IF (Quatrain)

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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Even if the promises were broken, I shall live
Even if the love was gone, I shall pursue to give
And if our story ended, I'll keep on believing
For in every end there comes another beginning...


© 2014 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
"Let go of yesterday. Let today be a new beginning and be the best that you can, and you'll get to where God wants you to be." ---Joel Osteen


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Your poem sends my poetic imagination into a frenzy: I was inspired to write this rendition of your poem which you may keep as your own. I used many of your words:

Transcend

Even if your promises are broken,
I shall live.
Even if your love is just a token,
I shall give.

Should our story ever end,
I’ll keep believing
for in time love must transcend
beyond receiving.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

9 Years Ago

Thanks, Aethereal.
Aethereal

9 Years Ago

You're welcome! This poem is mostly yours. As I said, it's just one rendition of many possible rendi.. read more
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

9 Years Ago

............. =)



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A circle of hope. Well defined.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

9 Years Ago

Thanks, Legion.
Such inspiring and enlightening words, I would love this poem no matter what form you did it in.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

9 Years Ago

Thanks, cowboy. =)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Years Ago

You are very welcome hon :)
Beautifully penned Dhaye . Short and simple but speaks volume .

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

9 Years Ago

Thanks, Neil. I love concise pieces nowadays. They are not time-consuming. LOL
Your poem sends my poetic imagination into a frenzy: I was inspired to write this rendition of your poem which you may keep as your own. I used many of your words:

Transcend

Even if your promises are broken,
I shall live.
Even if your love is just a token,
I shall give.

Should our story ever end,
I’ll keep believing
for in time love must transcend
beyond receiving.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

9 Years Ago

Thanks, Aethereal.
Aethereal

9 Years Ago

You're welcome! This poem is mostly yours. As I said, it's just one rendition of many possible rendi.. read more
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

9 Years Ago

............. =)
i love the message, dhaye. Something has to end to give way to something greater/better.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

9 Years Ago

Thanks, Gab. :)
Change comes from within and with God's help we can achieve miracles in the mundane and the spiritual. In all beginnings we let go of something to make room for another. Excellent...:)............

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Sami.
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome muchly...:)..................

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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