SEA   (Haiku)

SEA (Haiku)

A Chapter by Margaux (Dhaye)
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Waves toss to and fro
Looks like wind pushes and pulls
When will it calm down?



© 2014 Margaux (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Margaux  (Dhaye)
Haiku (also called nature or seasonal haiku) is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5, 7, 5) or 17 syllables in all. Haiku is usually written in the present tense and focuses on nature (seasons).



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This reminded me of our beautiful but unpredictable beach back home. i might try to write something like this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

That's good. Haikus are cool poems. Thanks for dropping by, Gab.
Never. Like nature. When nature(Birds and such) and ocean is real quiet. A big storm is coming. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


I love the water. It's nature both fierce and calm. It carries back and forth. I highly appreciate your interpretation! Very nice Haiku!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Queenie.
It made me seasick just reading it, Dhaye. I've always wanted to see a Sea or an Ocean. I'm about as landlocked as you can be -- at leat 1,000 miles from the nearest ocean or even the Sea-sized Great Lakes. A very nice Haiku.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

LOL. Here in my place we can go anytime in the beach. Wish you can enjoy with the sea one day, Eddie.. read more

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Added on April 20, 2014
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