OUR STORY

I wrote about it

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Crazy dreams, silly thoughts
I made a story in my mind
I am yours, you are mine
Oh, in my heart we have this bind

Catching stars, chasing dreams
I wish the story is for real
Kissing you, whisper words
I can't resist with what I feel

You and I in a world
A place where only us can see
I'm your queen, you're my king
Our love stays 'til eternity.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"I am yours, you are mine"
These words were written in the book of Jack London. One of my favorite lines in poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Really? I haven't read his works but I remember using this line for 3 times in my pieces.
Thanks, CP.

[Coyote Poetry]

Jack London wrote a book called "When Gods laugh". Had two amazing tales of love in it. I tell the young writers. There haven't been no words that haven't been written. Us writers are borrowers of words. Dryden said. "You can't own words. You want them to expand and multiply."

[Eddie Davis]

A beautiful poem, Dhaye, hopeful and romantic in its feel.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, Eddie.

[Rachelle]

Simply love………………………………….

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, sis. Love is my favorite subject. LOL.

[CoraZanini]

Word flow so lightly,again- impressed! And I love the simplicity.Keep me informed:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for the read and the kind words.

[MsJewel]

Soft and lovely....I love the dream like flow of your words in this beautifully penned poem.

:) Julie

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you. Ms. J.