CHAPTER VI. REMINISCENCE

CHAPTER VI. REMINISCENCE

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

“IF YOU SAY GOODBYE”

 

If you say goodbye
Please hug me tight
Until you feel the warmth of my body
And you realize you still need
My warmth
My caress
My love.

If you say goodbye
Kiss me one more time
Until you feel the love from my breath
And you realize you still want
My lips
My body
My soul.

If you say goodbye
Whisper once again
Those words you used to tell me
For the last time
Until you feel how you love to say those words
For me
For my happiness
For ours...
Because you still love me.








              I sat at the same bench where our story had started. I can’t explain what I felt that moment. Regret? Anger? Perhaps, I was angry with myself for everything.


            I took the same hanky from my pocket. Ah, there’s nothing I can do but to reminisce the memories of her. She was the sweetest girl I’ve ever met. Now, how it is hurting to know that there’s somebody touching and kissing her.


            My tears fell down. Everything I have now is but a hurting memory of her. The park. The bench. The hanky. And when I looked up, I saw the threatening downpour- a heavy downpour. As heavy as my heart today.


When the rain fell down, I did not move. I want to reminisce more. The setting was almost complete. And she’s the only one missing…





© 2014 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


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This is such a sad end to all the hope and time he spent thinking of Marguax. Some small grammar errors to fix, story has started should be story had started, and I was angry to myself should be I was angry at myself or I was angry with myself .
I nice little story.

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Noel.



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That was beautifully sad and wonderfully done, you could feel the pain and the sadness.

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Eddie.
This is such a sad end to all the hope and time he spent thinking of Marguax. Some small grammar errors to fix, story has started should be story had started, and I was angry to myself should be I was angry at myself or I was angry with myself .
I nice little story.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Noel.

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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