How Far Would I Go To Love You?

How Far Would I Go To Love You?

A Chapter by Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)
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A collaboration with Pax. There's a music video to let you hear the tune. =)

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HOW FAR WOULD I GO TO LOVE YOU

Words by: Willyam Pax
Music by: Daisie Partido Vergara


How far would I go to love you?
How many times would I dive in River Bayou.
Loving you this way seems isn't enough
I longed for you to give me a chance, ohh...
 

Would my love be enough for you?
Or you'll disregard me for what I have at hand?
Would you leave me in shades of black or blue.
My love is bare because I care, my love


Refrain:
Would you give me a little bit of love in advance?
Would you give me a chance to see you stay.
So much as I breathe your essence like air
I was so tired even though I tried my very best
Sometimes I feel like giving-up,
But resigning wouldn't do anything to stop
This heart that beats only for you somehow ask
How far would I go to love you?


I know I don't have everything
For I survive with just some little things,
Enough for me to live this kind of life
And even my choices are full of strife

Refrain:
Would you give me a little bit of love in advance?
Would you give me a chance to see you stay.
So much as I breathe your essence like air
I was so tired even though I tried my very best
Sometimes I feel like giving-up,
But resigning wouldn't do anything to stop
This heart that beats only for you somehow ask
How far would I go to love you?



Original poem:

How far would I go to love you?





© 2015 Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)


Author's Note

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)
Recently, I can't write more poems because of writer's block. But a poem of a friend helped me overcome it and became my muse to compose a song out of it with some revisions on the lines.
Again, I'm not an expert keyboard player but I hope I made justice in turning the poem into a lyrical piece.
Credits to Pax's poem. I made some changes in some lines of the original piece to fit with the musical lines.


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"my love is bare because i care"
so simple yet so profound in what is not there....all the materialistic things...just the bare bones of love....for many that is not enough...and that is so sad because that is what will last when all else is gone---

really good collaboration, sounds like only one poet wrote this...you guys blend so well.

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

Thank you, Sir J. I just made some revisions in Pax's poem. The words are still his. The most diffic.. read more



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Galing, Sis and Bro!
More collabs in the future!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

Thanks, sis.
"my love is bare because i care"
so simple yet so profound in what is not there....all the materialistic things...just the bare bones of love....for many that is not enough...and that is so sad because that is what will last when all else is gone---

really good collaboration, sounds like only one poet wrote this...you guys blend so well.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

Thank you, Sir J. I just made some revisions in Pax's poem. The words are still his. The most diffic.. read more
There isn't anything that two people are able to do at all to reinforce the mood of love in each other. They just come in proximity with each other, and the magic either happens or it doesn’t. Cupid’s arrow either hits or misses his two intended targets. Since this song has rhythm, it’s a song. You should show where the accents, and non-accents are placed on each line. This song is a plea to Cupid for the magic to happen both ways. I would write a love song somewhat like this:

I am

I’m in the mood of love
simply because I am,
and I’m more so
when I’m near you.
Do you feel
the same way?

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

You always leave me with such statements about love, Ae. I think I have to learn more about it from .. read more
Aethereal

5 Years Ago

Oh, just go to any library and look up the Psychology of Moods. Have you ever wondered why computers.. read more
Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

Okay...Psychology of Moods. Thanks!
The refrain is awesome, dhaye. it easily registers in the mind of the listeners. you got sweet and cute voice...i could not really imagine now kung paano ka magsermon ng student. =)

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the compliment. Antagal bago ko nakita ang piece na lalapatan ng tunog doon sa.. read more
gabrielle

5 Years Ago

Hahahahaha! Pede naman ah, sound track ng horror movie. lol
Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

Akala ko nga mapipikon yung isang yun kasi sinabi ko talaga sa kanya, parang theme song ni Dracula a.. read more
You write and sing love in a great package of emotions. Bravo..................

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

Thank you.
Sami Khalil

5 Years Ago

You are welcome muchly...:)....................
A true test of someones love for us is when the going gets tough, those are also the times when we truly learn how we feel about someone else. Nice collaboration.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much, cowboy. =)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

5 Years Ago

It was my pleasure.
A beautiful song and words. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

Thanks, CP.
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Pax
I just love what you did in the refrain my pretty friend... Your vioce is cute and so well fitted on the song. I simply love it... Now I can't believed I wrote the lyrics of this song... its amazing, a huge thanks to you...

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Pax

5 Years Ago

I am so glad I had this collab, my pretty friend... this made me think that my poems with the right .. read more
Pax

5 Years Ago

can you give me an mp3 of this song?
Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

5 Years Ago

give me your email address

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