THE DANCE

couplets

Hon, I always wanted to dance with you
But you just  let me dance with my shadow

Every step I make, I feel you are there
Though even a little bit you do not care

Alas! I felt those warm hands holding mine
While my eyes are closed, I can feel the twine

Just to be surprised it is not you, dear
You are there watching, cannot hide your sneer

Hon, I always wanted to dance with you
But you just  let me dance with my shadow.

Author's Note

Something I wrote when I was battling with my WB. Just a photo-prompted piece.

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love that opening and of coarse last line… some people don't know when they have a good thing right in front of them.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for dropping by, cowboy. It's just a piece inspired by the photo, which I always do when I don't have any other muse in writing.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well awesome work as always, was my pleasure.

[gabrielle]

Consistent 10 syllable and the rhyme. Meticulously done, dhaye. When we can dance by ourselves, it shows how independent we are. thank you for sharing.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Gab. =)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem for the dance. The dance is under-rated. Good to know a dance floor and dance to good song. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, CP.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.