Dangerous Ground

This world

We are all children playing
On a very  dangerous ground
Hiding and then seeking
Running and going the round

We are all players praying
That in the end we'll win
The game of every dangerous being
Makes a perfect dangerous spin

Life isn't really  fair, is it?
Come and show me why
The place where you choose to sit
Always shows you a  dark sky

It's true that the world could be
A very dangerous ground to stay
But when a hero hears your plea
You can find the safest way...

 

Author's Note

We pass through different tests and trials but only One gives us hope to be saved...

Reviews

[gabrielle]

The end-rhyme is very consistent. As to the content, you again weave something that touches and reminds us that our everyday challenges and our own darkness could be surpassed. The fact that someone is sent to guide us out of our darkness meant that the world is not truly as wicked or as dark as we thought.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you so much, Gab.

[Pax]

I second agree to the ever wise-one, Gab.

[mournful bear]

nice reading!! we all feel, every now and then, the dark cloud engulf our moments in life. we feel there may be no more, yet trust in the TEACHER and the sun will break through theses DARK clouds showing us the way. great reading!!!!!!!!!!

[Sami Khalil]

The message is loud and clear. I enjoyed this poem and was inspired. Thank you for posting...:)....

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks you, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly....:)........

[Coyote Poetry]

"Life isn't really fair, is it?
Come and show me why
The place where you choose to sit
Always shows you a dark sky"
I like the thoughts and places you took me. You create vision of dangerous places where we must learn to live in and survive. I believe we set our table. Leave with dear near or stand fearless, unstoppable. Thank you Dhaye for your outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, CP

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Poet.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is such a thoughtful poem...the second stanza really got to me..."makes a perfect dangerous spin"

great line...this world definitely is a dangerous ground today...all the praying may not be enough...we need to rise up and take our world back....find peace...

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you for the kind words, Sir.