At The Sea

At The Sea

A Chapter by Margaux (Dhaye)
"

of love

"


Footprints
Long ago -
     can't hold

Warm water
Yesterday-
       now cold

Clear sky
In the past-
      it's gone

Dreams made
Not alone-
     undone

Seawall
Once that strong-
      Broken

Seabirds
Together-
      unseen

Two hearts
Believing-
        asking

One love
Forever-
         hoping




© 2014 Margaux (Dhaye)


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Margaux  (Dhaye)
Another writing exercise...

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I like the style of this piece, Dhaye. Every stanza requires me pause and ponder on what it wants to convey. This is what i get on this piece: Circumstances are always changing. What is sweet today may turn out sour one day; what is strong yesterday may turn weak today... We can never predict the future but we can always hope and believe that the future will turn out better than today.

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Margaux  (Dhaye)

5 Years Ago

Very good! Plus 10. Lol
I love your insights, Gab. I did not intend to portray such idea becau.. read more



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Beautiful and hopeful poem. The sea and love. Two pieces needed to create a forever memory. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

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Margaux  (Dhaye)

5 Years Ago

Thank you for spending time in reading my piece, CP.
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

It was my pleasure and you are welcome. Hard time for me. I work retail. Few days to read and relax.
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Pax
its like a droplets of poems, each one with a heavy melancholy.... wonderful work, pretty friend.

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Margaux  (Dhaye)

5 Years Ago

Thank you, Pax.
...simply wonderful. Nice to see these thoughts captured so well.

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Margaux  (Dhaye)

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Night

5 Years Ago

Well deserved my friend. ...=)
*SIGH*… Love is perfect but humans are not, and all we can hope for is love is strong enough to overcome our imperfections. Your words and hauntingly beautiful my friend.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Margaux  (Dhaye)

5 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, Sir!
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

5 Years Ago

You are most welcome young lady.
I like the style of this piece, Dhaye. Every stanza requires me pause and ponder on what it wants to convey. This is what i get on this piece: Circumstances are always changing. What is sweet today may turn out sour one day; what is strong yesterday may turn weak today... We can never predict the future but we can always hope and believe that the future will turn out better than today.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

5 Years Ago

Very good! Plus 10. Lol
I love your insights, Gab. I did not intend to portray such idea becau.. read more
yes, as lydi said...."bittersweet"

there is love and hope at the end...but earlier on...that feeling that nothing beautiful lasts...

i have found too often, love is ephemeral...no matter how hard we try to preserve it.

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Margaux  (Dhaye)

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much, sir j.
Heavy sigh! Dh, this is just so lovely. The emotions are velvety soft albeit bittersweet. A poignant beauty of a write. Lydi**

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Margaux  (Dhaye)

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Lydi.

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