This Life

This Life

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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mysterious

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This life is a recondite transit
Where our paths might be unknown
We would stop  at varied crossroads
When confused at those strange zones

The sky each day may differ
There could be sun,  there could be rain
It could be blue or could be orange
But on the next pace,  it could be grey

And if ever the times get harsh
That we might stumble and fall
Just remember we're not alone
In going through tight bouts at all

Life is a creek of promises
Springing from heavens above
The rain of life will flow on us
We should welcome the gift of love

But like a battlefield we know
What we purport is to survive
In this platform of test and ventures
After each fall,  we must revive

Life is survival of the fittest
The world is a precarious place
Don't be that weak who cannot soar
Be like an eagle, conquer the space. 


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© 2016 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
For the "10 WORDS I GIVE" CONTEST where I have to use the following words in poem:

STOP
ORANGE
GREY
STUMBLE
CREEK
HEAVENS
BATTLEFIELD
PLATFORM
WEAK
EAGLE




Thanks for the inspiration....no writer's block this time. :)

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Pax
"Life is survival of the fittest"

ahh, i remember that quote so well, and you have always that great positive attitude in you pretty friend on which i admire as your friend. You know that quote always strikes me as a good motivation, to survive all the harsh realities we faced and about to stumble upon... life is just like that... wonderful!!!

ps sana manalo ka sa contest :)

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

5 Years Ago

Nanalo nga. Thank you, Pax.



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Awesome usage of words.. Need I not say more, deep is your vision in this
wonderful poetry my dear,
Love the rhyming as well very cool. Thanks EG.

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

5 Years Ago

Thank you, kabayan.
Very Beautiful, confused by a plan to keep us in that zone
The sky it varies, but yet the Sun is constant
Not like Grand Mother moon always Changing
In the harshness we might stumble
But we return to Mothers Creek
Yet the battle it returns
See that we are not Weak, but Eagles flying in our Sky

Everything but Survival of the Fittest, a lie to keep us confused
We will rise from this Mess we are in, together, as Nature
all are helping each other in the struggle to stay Alive

Incredibly well done Dhaye, I love the Image, the Eagle, the Orange Sky!
Is it a painting you have done, or a computer art? It has it all in it, the mystery of Life.

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

5 Years Ago

Hello! Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts here, HS.
Healing Star

5 Years Ago

thank you, crossing paths again, two hearts expanding within their own worlds.
Blessings to y.. read more
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Pax
"Life is survival of the fittest"

ahh, i remember that quote so well, and you have always that great positive attitude in you pretty friend on which i admire as your friend. You know that quote always strikes me as a good motivation, to survive all the harsh realities we faced and about to stumble upon... life is just like that... wonderful!!!

ps sana manalo ka sa contest :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

5 Years Ago

Nanalo nga. Thank you, Pax.
Whenever i read poem, i would often associate it with other poems that i've read. This one makes me think of Desiderata. Truly, like an eagle, we are all given wings and it's up to us how to make use of it.

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

5 Years Ago

Thanks, Gab.
I just say AMEN! I feel uplighted because I face (as well as many others do) big obstacles right now and this felt uplifting in so many ways. I love it! Well written with imagery easily related to by the masses. We all need inspiration. You've made good use of the chosen words this week and I commend you. Thank you for your entry! Kudos

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much, dear poet for giving me the chance to express my views about life.
God ble.. read more
AWESOME JOB! Inspiring and thought-provoking piece. Writer's block took a foot in the butt on this one!

Thanks for the share!

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

5 Years Ago

Thanks so much, A. Actually, when I read your poem The Journey. I saw that it was written for a cont.. read more
"Life is a creek of promises"...what a fantastic line that is, Dh! Certainly we must learn to navigate the potholes of life....we must keep going no matter what. An uplifting life lesson in this one. I liked it a lot. Lydi**

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much Lydi. I appreciate your visit today.
What a magnificent and uplifting poem. You have combined the essence of nature with our ability to be all that we can be. Very lovely writing.

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much, A hare off
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mou
True,even according to Darwin theory-- survival of the fittest.and as a result of this, we get this new era.life has many rules over all individual and react according to our outcome towards it.You flaunt all the aspect of life beautifully.Nice poem!!
Thank you for sharing.

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

5 Years Ago

Thank you, mou
Strong and worthwhile my friend.
"Life is survival of the fittest
The world is a precarious place
Don't be that weak who cannot soar
Be like an eagle, conquer the space. "
Life should be our decision. Wild or calm road. Our choice. A fearless life is the best life. Thank you dear friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Coyote.
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome dear friend.

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