Tessellated Heart

Tessellated Heart

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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Cracks...

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Lover of yesterday
You rise and shine
Fragmented into pieces
Yet coated with art

Colored teardrops
Harmonic cries
Tessellated walls
Of your broken heart


© 2016 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Tessellate: to form or arrange in a checkered or mosaic pattern

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Wow, that was very nice, Dhaye! You were very conservative with your words and it had a very modern, focused feel and the carefully chosen words were very thought provoking. 'Colored teardrops' was an especially wonderful choice, as it conveys a variety of meanings, and perhaps the one who is weeping is experiencing a mixture of emotions that make the teardrops colorful. Very nice poem! Also, another word that has been added to my brain's dictionary.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

4 Years Ago

Thank you, Eddie.



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A beautiful but necessarily-brief exploration back to yesterday, and the subsequent fruits of its labor.
You continue to blossom in your craft, Dhaye, and I'm proud, knowing what goes into that.

Thanks for sharing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much, A. I am so glad you liked this.
Wow, that was very nice, Dhaye! You were very conservative with your words and it had a very modern, focused feel and the carefully chosen words were very thought provoking. 'Colored teardrops' was an especially wonderful choice, as it conveys a variety of meanings, and perhaps the one who is weeping is experiencing a mixture of emotions that make the teardrops colorful. Very nice poem! Also, another word that has been added to my brain's dictionary.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

4 Years Ago

Thank you, Eddie.
yes, ex lovers make for great poems, don't they?
they color our teardrops and they put hues in our ink, as we write them down.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

4 Years Ago

Right, sir. I am glad that this poem out of a verse only which I made into 2 verses (each verse is .. read more

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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