Fairytale

For you and Joy...

Like a flame blown by wind

Sometimes we resist 

But oftentimes we sway

We follow the flow with eyes closed

Tears roll while hearts pray

That in time we'll be back 

To where we want to stay

You left,  I was alone

I searched only to fail

But I never gave up 

Until you came back

With bigger heart and more wisdom

Like sailors we tried to sail 

While I still believe in fairytale

Days passed,  years gone by

Lines on forehead appear

Veins on shaky hands

But our hearts stay younger

With an old,  great story to tell

Our song,  nothing can replace

The best love song ever played

Our love,  our story

It's the greatest fairytale

Author's Note

Thanks to the holiday.. I have time to write this time.

Reviews

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Beautiful poetry. I love the last two lines...
"Our love, our story
It's the greatest fairytale"

Btw, what is the name of the first song playing on your profile??

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you for reading.
Sorry, I forgot the title of the song. It's been a while I stay longer on my profile.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're most welcome.
Thanks anyway. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

to come back with bigger heart and more wisdom...that makes for a lasting love...

happy endings...

such a hopeful write.

j.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, sir

[Jimmy Yetts]

A lovely perspective portraying tender sentiments--yet also demonstrating strength.
Inspiring read, Dhaye!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for reading.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love can certainly feel like a Fairytale, we just have to remember that Fairytales have villains just as life. We must beat them now and then to keep the ever happily after going.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, sir

[Jamey]

The second and third stanzas really stand out to me...I still believe in fairy tales too..although I'm a little more jaded now haha

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, Jamey

[Tom]

Love is indeed a timeless emotion that bonds the souls of those so engrossed for eternity!

A beautiful poem, brimming with loving sentiment!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you for such kind words, Tom.

[YanZeros]

Young love to Old love, this is a forever love! very inspiring and made me hope that someday i'll experience the same fairy tale. Happy to read such poem Dhaye! :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you. I am happy that you enjoyed reading this.

[YanZeros]

you're welcome! :)

[I Am Svetlana]

It's great that holidays give us time to finally sit down and enjoy our craft & talent, yeah? I really enjoyed this because it makes us understand that it's okay to still believe in fairytales, even if it may be our own we are trying to create. I sure do still believe in my dreams and fairytales, to have faith that dreams do come true. Beautiful! Keep up the good work.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Svetlana, thank you for the time. It's nice to know that a reader enjoyed this poetry.