Words

Words

A Poem by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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Love always and all ways...

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The feel, the touch on my skin
Brings ecstasy to last forever
I feel your love all over me
Kisses so sweet and tender

The dreams, the promises we made
Carry me to a wonderland
I see myself walking with you
On a beach walking hand in hand

This fairytale inside my heart
A prayer I always sing
Your words of love bring me to tears
As I look in this silver ring

© 2017 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Happy to see them strong through the years

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A beautiful tale described in the words.
"This fairytale inside my heart
A prayer I always sing
Your words of love bring me to tears
As I look in this silver ring"
I loved the above lines. Thank you my friend for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is such a beautiful song of love, and how love has transformed your world into a wonderland. May this light always illuminate your sacred, wondrous life. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for reading
An owl on the moon

6 Years Ago

Always a joy here.
A beautiful tale described in the words.
"This fairytale inside my heart
A prayer I always sing
Your words of love bring me to tears
As I look in this silver ring"
I loved the above lines. Thank you my friend for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that ring is an unbroken circle...as love should be...

nicely phrased this poem is.

j.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thank you, sir
Another sweet and tender piece of work, Dhaye. The ending reminds me of the supposed 3 rings of marriage: engagement ring, wedding ring and "suffering". lol. But of course, suffering may always be overcome by love and respect.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thank you, gandang Gab.

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Added on January 22, 2017
Last Updated on January 22, 2017
Tags: ring, love, silver, promise, dream, one, words

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

Philippines



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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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