OBLIVION

OBLIVION

A Poem by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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Am I lost?

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Hanging, floating
On this
Dark and empty room

Shouting, crying
Like
Feeling in doom

Calling your name
I am
Lost and all alone

Hopeless and blind
For you
Am I unknown

© 2020 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Writing exercise with a word prompt.

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Screaming out to be noticed, but no one cares. Reminds me of the premise behind the Neil Diamond song, "I Am I Said!" Longing to be with someone who is no longer in your life. Powerfully emotional write. Lydi**

Posted 6 Months Ago


Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

6 Months Ago

Thanks for the read and review, Ms. L.
The state of desperation is truly felt in this piece. What I like most about the verse is that it can be subject to different interpretation. It may refer to the state of mind of a rejected lover, or perhaps it may even pertains to our passion which set aside to focus more on other things.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

6 Months Ago

Yes, you know my poems can be interpreted in different ways. Hehe.
Thank you so much for bei.. read more
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

6 Months Ago

I had to find my muse even through a word. And the word limbo came in mind so here it is. 😁
when we feel no one even knows we exist?
that is the darkest time---and even our rhymes cannot shine a light for us.
by the way, loved how you rhymed in this one.
great scheme...helps us to find our way even without the light.
we need to discover our own self worth and not give a damn whether others care or not.
I believe.
j.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

6 Months Ago

Thank you, sir J! I really appreciate everytime you review my poem. And thank you for always motivat.. read more

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Added on May 16, 2020
Last Updated on May 16, 2020
Tags: Lost, limbo, forgotten, sadness

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

Philippines



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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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