Two Flowers

Two Flowers

A Poem by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

Memories of good friendship will be treasured forever...

I was a lonely flower in the field
Surrounded by weeds
Feeling stupid
And weak

You were the other flower
Feet away
Surrounded by weeds
Just like me

But I admired you
For we are different
You are smart
And Strong
Unlike me

Our friendship
Is one best gift
I ever had

I prayed for you
To be happy
See your own smile
When you look in the mirror
One thing that you never realize
Because what you see in me
Is what you think of the weeds
Around you

So I decided to look
At the weeds around me
Learned to dance with them
And see their beauty
Until I find my own

Now I see
Two beautiful flowers

Miles away
From each other

© 2020 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

Author's Note

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Sometimes getting too busy creates fear that could be a muse, too.

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Hopeful and good words shared my dear friend. Sometime we must find joy in a field of weeds. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.

Posted 1 Year Ago

I liked the piece, well written and struck a chord with me. Well written.

Posted 2 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

2 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts about it.
social distancing in metaphor...sometimes it takes another's reflection to show us our own true worth.
beautiful piece.

Posted 2 Years Ago

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4 Reviews
Added on June 3, 2020
Last Updated on July 31, 2020
Tags: Best Buddy, friend, sister, ate


Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..


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