All because of you...

All because of you...

A Poem by Dread Solomon
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It's all because of you, 
that my heart's broken,
that my soul's shattered
into pieces I never bothered for a fix,
and deep down, I know,
feelings were never mutual,
sparks flew as in us, they duel,
igniting a flame, without fail, without fuel,
your cold shoulder next, a sick irony,
yet, deeper down,
it pains me, more than never,
of deserting this love for you,
I couldn't...

© 2010 Dread Solomon


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You are very good with wording in your poems...It's very nice...I like it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


"igniting a flame, without fail, without fuel,
your cold shoulder next, a sick irony," - my favorite part. I like your choice of words and they still connect with the same overall mood even though something like that is a rather powerful line package! Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Dread Solomon
Dread Solomon

Kuching, Sarawak, Malaysia



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'I believe whatever doesn't kill you, simply makes you... stranger.' I'm a whole bunch of things... a poet, a story teller, a lazy novelist, a pianist, a beginner saxophonist, a geek with good loo.. more..

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