Cant waste time

You have wasted all of my trust.

You also haken it away from me.

But why wouuld you go crazy.

I can't believe you any more.

No matter what you say or do.

 

Can't waste time so give it,

Another moment.

Cause you are so hot and you are so cold.

Your'e Yes and then No.

 

I have called the cops on you.

Many times.

But you have always ran away from me.

Why Why Why.

No matter what I said or do.

You will always be so crazy.

 

Can't waste time so give it,

Another moment.

Cause you are so hot and you are so cold.

Your'e Yes and then No

Heatherawesome

Reviews

[chaotic katie]

i love it heather it has so much emotion fantastic job

[♥(heatherawesome..]

thank you all

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing. Nothing as bad as someone who is never content. They will only get worst. I like the movement of your words. The poem told a good story and was a pleasure to read. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Carolina Kel]

I feel a Katy Perry influence coming in. lol
I like this, but there are some mistakes that I noticed.
"haken" should either be have taken or took. Would only has one u, it should be you're instead of your'e. Just stuff like that. Other than that, I like this.
Good job. Keep writing, but try to be more careful about spelling and grammar. :)

[Sam Severn]

What I love best about this poem is that it's rampant with emotions! The feelings are running amok, n' overpowering, n' real!....Beautiful!! ㋡

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

i see you write lota love poems Nice work. look to read more of your work