A lovely haiku string my friend, just one little point if i may ...the alliteration between "mourning" and "meandering" is wonderful but using "ing" twice in such a small line is not very good in any kind of form.Maybe "mourning doves meander free" ? ,just a suggestion:)
Posted 7 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Thanks for taking time to review this one Stella ~ I truly do appreciate it my friend.
.. read moreThanks for taking time to review this one Stella ~ I truly do appreciate it my friend.
What a beautiful haiku with wonderful imagery you shared! I love nature but can't write as beautifully as you or others write here.Very pleasing to read...
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
THANK YOU SO MUCH SIMA , I APPRECIATE THE KIND WORDS IN REVIEW. HSG 😇
Thank you for taking the time to read and leave such kind comments, they are very much appreciated ... read moreThank you for taking the time to read and leave such kind comments, they are very much appreciated . MHSG😇
dear Mary Jo... pleasant birds and special flowers are part of our heritage.., a group of Haiku lifts me up and away to a gorgeous day.
truly, Pat
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
Pat, Thanks for taking the time to read and leave your kind words on this piece. I truly appreciate.. read morePat, Thanks for taking the time to read and leave your kind words on this piece. I truly appreciate it. 🌹🌻MJ
I ADORE haikus. Very simple. Very lovely. Great read.
Posted 6 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
Thank You Laurie Rose ~ I’m glad that you enjoyed this older piece that I had posted. I’m sorry.. read moreThank You Laurie Rose ~ I’m glad that you enjoyed this older piece that I had posted. I’m sorry for the late response. 🌹
I must admit I am quite fond of the haiku and senryu form. I've never presented multiple verses though. Love the nature appeal to this.
Welcome to the WC!
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Kelly, thanks so much for the visit & kind words in review of this little Haiku Suite. Writing abou.. read moreKelly, thanks so much for the visit & kind words in review of this little Haiku Suite. Writing about nature has a way of calming one’s soul & bringing forth a peacefulness to Life.
A celebration of nature in your three well penned Haikus ( Haiku ??)
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Thank you Gee for the kind words in review of this posting ~ they are very much appreciated. read moreThank you Gee for the kind words in review of this posting ~ they are very much appreciated.
I've always liked nature poems so this was easy to read and like. The images are clear.
Nice job on this. :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Relic, thank you for reading another of my limited offerings here on WC ~ it is very much appreciate.. read moreRelic, thank you for reading another of my limited offerings here on WC ~ it is very much appreciated. I hope to be posting something new soon.