To The Notes

To The Notes

A Poem by trainwreck

Do you remember the magic

We had back then,

Way back when

You and I were young,

Just scorching in the sun,

You and I, two lost souls on the run?

Do you recall the memory

Of when your soul first kissed me?

Is it fading? What can’t I see?

Why, exactly, are we hiding?

 

Baby, please, please, please…

Remember.

Remember loathing me.

Remember loving me.

Remember holding me.

Remember anything!

I think I know why I’m quiet now;

Broken walls that won’t be torn down,

A melody I could sing without a sound,

A song for those alone,

The piece for the bird that has already flown.

 

My muse,

Oh I miss you.

Oh! How I’ve missed you.

The only one who could give me dreams,

The lover who could shred me at the seams.

Oh my musicality,

My morality,

The one to whom I sold me.

My angel who fell in flames,

I’m begging.

I don’t care how it sounds,

But please….

Once more, for the crowd,

Just sing me my name. 

© 2013 trainwreck


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trainwreck
Please review honestly. :)

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I'm glad I read your profile before I read this. I can definitely see the songwriter in you. The poem was beautiful, and would make such a lovely song. The line, "My angel who fell in flames" just touched me. I'm not sure why exactly. Probably because it's just such powerful imagery. Truly great work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


trainwreck

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your review! It's always encouraging to hear that someone liked my work.
Longing for a love once had now lost, but it can never be forgotten.
A touching, heartfelt emotional write. Well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


Love the phrases in this peace, so beautiful!

Posted 8 Years Ago


You really have something in your poem. It made me feel something ... magical, yeah. Anyway, it's a nice one. I like it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


trainwreck

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review.
All I can say is.....beautiful poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Some have the words, some have their tones... and a few have the full weave .

Do you write the music down?

Posted 8 Years Ago


trainwreck

8 Years Ago

I usually record it and write a lead sheet. So far I haven't posted any of my song lyrics to the Caf.. read more
"The only one who could give me dreams,
The lover who could shred me at the seams. "
A sad and beautiful poem. I like the desire to rebirth something lost. The good description took the reader into good memories and wishes. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


trainwreck

8 Years Ago

Thank you. :) Your opinion is always really interesting. Thanks again!

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I'm Heidi. I normally write songs, but these are the things I write when I have nothing better to say in lyrics. I am a Christian, but my work is, honestly, not overly religious. I am passionate a.. more..

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