Maybe All Really Is Already Helped

Maybe All Really Is Already Helped

A Poem by trainwreck

You met with me again,

There you were,

Little sister and best friend,

And it was like a day hadn’t passed.


I could see your past,

You crying on my chest,

While I was trying to try my best

To hold you tight enough to scare

The demons, to prove I cared

Enough to love you as you were.


I remember that, yet here you are,

And by Jove, you’re alive!

Thank God He gave you life!

I can only imagine all the things

That could have happened,

All the paths you had before you,

All the roads you could have taken.


And I love you.

Not for the fire in your eyes,

Not for the heart full of life,

Not for your love that has to shine,

But for you being.


I can’t forget you, and I love it.

You’re the muse who tells me to sing,

Who tells me to live,

Who’s seen it all,

Been there for everything.


Thank you for being here with me:

The sister who won’t leave,

Who cares enough to see,

Looking through all my smoky screens.


I missed your heartbeat.

But I have it now,

And it’s enough for me. 

© 2013 trainwreck

Author's Note

So I saw my friend and someone I consider a little sister recently, and I missed her like crazy. This is a little more directly about someone than I usually write, so it might not be quite so poetic, but its okay. I love you. :)

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What a reassuring write this is and it can be so true that one special being can bring out what's so deep inside of us. Your friend in words, Pete

Posted 7 Years Ago

Your friend is very lucky to have you! Such a pure write! Lovely.

Posted 7 Years Ago


7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your reviews! :) It's always nice to be able to be kind in my writing.

7 Years Ago

Your welcome! :-)
For the simple fact that your words come from your soul, and your whole heart is in this piece, that is what makes it poetry. A wonderful way to tell someone how much you love them, and a beautiful sister love it is.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Beautiful.. Pen On.. Do u read mine 2 Time, Why? and who is a poet.. If possible then give ur reviews..


Posted 8 Years Ago

this is really sweet! such a sisterly love you can really feel. Great job! I know sometimes my friend and I dont agree but she is like a sister to me!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Lovely stuff :) Beautiful plutonic love!

Posted 8 Years Ago


8 Years Ago

Thank you for the review.
Luke L

8 Years Ago

no worries
Good friends are like gold. I like the story and the description in the poem. Friends stay with us when we are weak and need a kind voice and face. Thank you for the excellent poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


8 Years Ago

Thank you for your review. :)
Okay? This piece that you wrote is amazing,heartfelt, and just awesome! You did a really great job that it put me into tears. The whole time I was reading this I was thinking about my little sister. you did a really good job and I'm speechless! Keep writing. your good at what you do!

Posted 8 Years Ago


8 Years Ago

Thanks for your lovely review. :)
Bridget Mcmaken

8 Years Ago

you are very welcome
This is really cute. I love it

Posted 8 Years Ago


8 Years Ago

Thanks Lily. :)
'but its okay' nah. I would say that it's MORE than okay. Personal experiances carry quite a bit of weight and when written as well as you write them, they are powerful peices. This is very well crafted and compelling too. Terrific job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


8 Years Ago

Thank you. :) I feel bad having you read all of my work, so please, send me some read requests so I .. read more
zach h.

8 Years Ago

Haha, don't worry about it. I know that I have the option of reading (or not reading) anyone's work,.. read more

8 Years Ago

Sweet. :)

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Added on April 8, 2013
Last Updated on April 8, 2013




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