Mine forever [What A Wonderful Dream]

Mine forever [What A Wonderful Dream]

A Poem by ∠( ᐛ 」∠)_
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A love of mine I shall thank endlessly for the happiness he gave me.

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You and me outside ...
Resting on a old hammock ...
Uptop a low, windy hill ...
Me, resting on top of your chest ...
You, hugging my body close to you ...
Both, sleeping comfortably as the wind lightly swings us ...
As we both slept peacefully, I whispered softly in my sleep:
"You are forever my wonderful"

© 2013 ∠( ᐛ 」∠)_


Author's Note

∠( ᐛ 」∠)_
This is a dream I had when I past out of boredom yesterday....
Yes, I know, you know, we all know this is to small and the ending didn't make much sense, but hey, I was just dreaming.
Thank you GDM for the inspitation and love :)

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Awwwh I really loved this, Roxast. It doesn't matter how long this is and how the ending ended. Dreams are well just dreams. Sometimes they don't happen the way we want and at other times they're way better than reality. I am happy for you that you had a such wonderful and loving dream. I have had maybe one of those lately. It makes sense though, since I'm now single. Your words are vivid and it took me there to where the scene happened to see how happy you two were together. Hammocks are romantic to me, but knowing my luck I would fall out of one of those. Hahaha!

"As we both slept peacefully, I whispered softly in my sleep:
"You are forever my wonderful" ---The best part of the dream to me. So sweet.

Overrall, I must say you done a terrific job and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Nice~
I like it!

Hope you always be together ;)

Posted 5 Years Ago


This is very sweet and shows an innocent form of affection and love.

Posted 5 Years Ago


This piece is amazing!!!
It touched me..

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is so cute and sweet!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Cute :3
The simplicity is perfect and the little spark is..oh! Lovely!

Posted 6 Years Ago


very nice dream sequince

Posted 6 Years Ago


i want a love like this!! beautiful poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


This was a really cute poem. I really enjoyed reading it. It did make sense to me. So good job. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Aw! So cute and sweet! :) 100/100

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awwww, this is sweet. Great job

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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