A lover's nostalgia

With every touch its different, scintillating gleams

impeccable description and encouraging words, 

sardonic whispers surround our bodies, 

but we just whisper haphazardly back.

With each kiss you give me, the invigorating feeling,

invades the evil fiend inside of me, 

and turns it to halcyon cadaver in the dead of the night.

Your kiss sends me deeper into the feeling of besot, 

the phantasmal atmosphere turns into perilous pleasure of happiness,

and the scent of true love will be reminiscent of you.

Cavernous eyes engulfs the beauty of this hour, 

the taciturn sounds of our love consumes the zephyr weather,

my heart is entombed under your beauty and elegance.

The cacophony whispers of our souls as they mend as one,

makes me fall deeper and deeper into the cave of love.

Reviews

[AndyJCash]

So many awe inspired word choices right there. Awesome is the only word for it.

[amdc101]

This is so beautiful. It shows that you have a wonderful vocabulary, and that makes it more impressive. Scrolling down I see I am thinking what everyone else has already said...so that's it! Great job!

[Jupiter Jazz]

Nice choice of words. Very bewitching

[Everson Taveras]

Brilliant poem. Though it seems that readers can often get lost reading this, because of its level of sophistication and depth, I still do believe that you've outdone yourself here.

[Alysa]

Excellent choice of words. I truly enjoyed reading this. You seem to be very in tune with the emotion. Great job. :)

[Becky C Strukamp]

With each kiss you give me, the invigorating feeling,
invades the evil fiend inside of me,
and turns it to halcyon cadaver in the dead of the night.

I really enjoyed this stanza. It speaks volume. An amazing poem. Great use of words.

[Kat Collins]

Intriguing...very challenging use of words. It seems a bit more complicated than it needs to be...I get lost in the descriptions and forget the poem as a whole. I have to keep rereading it to continue making sense and remember what I read. Not always a fault of a poem....keeps me engaged. There is a dark undercurrent despite some of the flighty, ephemeral words - the cave of love is dirty, dark, insidious...the poem balances on the edge, never quite swaying one way or the other. Again...intriguing...

One thing - "Your kiss is sends me" - I don't think "is" is the word that you meant...

[Brad]

another beaut, you are very in tune with love

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I had to read a few times. I like the way you used the language to make the point strong and clear.
"Your kiss is sends me deeper into the feeling of besot,
the phantasmal atmosphere turns into perilous pleasure of happiness,
and the scent of true love will be reminiscent of you."
Thank you for this outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Tasha]

I loved your word choice, it was romantic and sweet.
♥ Ta'Shandra