The Luck of the Return (Sad Savior)

The Luck of the Return (Sad Savior)

A Poem by Plagued Monumentally


















Before you,

there was anger,

there was anguish,

and there was danger,

there was baneful arguments,

and sardonic hate,

all I wanted to do was escape.


Abstruse thoughts,

phantasmal environment,

there was a dark hole

where my heart should be,

acerbic blood running through

my veins,

and my delirium mindset

drove me mad.


The white horse running along the

amethyst horizon,

making me realize how unique this night was,

and all the malevolent thoughts

washed away, 

your paramount eyes

made my heart escape its cadaver.


My cavernous eyes

turned into scintillating orbs of

impeccable halcyon,

because of the way you looked at me.


You saved me,

from myself,

I guess everyone needs a hero sometimes,

to realize that they are worth 

saving. 

© 2011 Plagued Monumentally


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Yes we all need a hero. Well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Great description made the poem come alive. All of us need to be saved. Easy to fall to bad desires. I like the positive ending to the poem.
"The white horse running along the
amethyst horizon,
making me realize how unique this night was,
and all the malevolent thoughts
washed away,
your paramount eyes
made my heart escape its cadaver."
Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote




Posted 8 Years Ago


"You saved me,
from myself,
I guess everyone needs a hero sometimes,
to realize that they are worth
saving."

Greatness.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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This is a very dark piece. Daunting, even, but that is exactly why I like it. Especially the conclusion. good job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow, love the imagery, you wrote this so nice with a great picture with feeling. I love the third stanza.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Defiantly one of my favorites from you. Well done..xx

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice appreciation of glorious guideline, follow the path paved with love, nicely written poem..........,

Posted 8 Years Ago


Yes they do.........wonderfully penned!

Posted 8 Years Ago


LOL Was this an exercise in using all of your vocab list words

Posted 8 Years Ago


agreed, thanks for writing!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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