Equinox B

Equinox B

A Poem by Plagued Monumentally

The demons invade her innocent soul,

making her character a mistress of nudity,

exemplifying her bravery and strength,

in the form of sexual foreplay.

The eight inch nails of her former lover,

imprinted in the back of her memory,

like a deranged inamorata suffering from,

obsession.

Her name is lost in the mixture of evil,

her deeds are dissipated by the whistle of the fiend wind,

her echoes are lost in the cave of slavery and 

men.

"Boris Vallejo! My one, my lover, my only one."

Her eyes dance with interrupted loneliness, 

the dance of humiliation and truth shine over

the bright horizon of the evening hour.

This fear is someone who she got to know,

and she calls fear a friend,

she has  been waiting for you to return,

to make her face her insecurities, 

of her past life.

© 2011 Plagued Monumentally


Author's Note

Plagued Monumentally
Equinox B, Boris Vallego and Mistress of Nudity is apart of a "fantasy world" online. Along with the vivid pictures and imagination.

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Pure evil and talent make for some great poetry! Thanks for the RR!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Interesting. That one line, "Her name is lost in the mixture of evil," really resonates with me

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a bit chilling. I like it! At the beginning it seemed like the demons were raping her. Then is seemed like she was submitting to them out of loneliness for her past lover.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow! Chilling and beautifully delivered love..had me hooked! xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


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captivating write..dark and intense..well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'm fascinated by your vocabulary. It's used so well in this one.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I just really like this and think you could do more tales on her.. she's very bewitching :) xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


Vivid indeed, like slave and master in the religious sense.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This stupendous piece showcases your tremendous talent. I've returned to it several times and am stunned by it's haunting beauty. File this under Favourites!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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