Anger, Grief, Strong, Vulnerable, Gone.

Basically anger, grief, strong, vulnerable, gone is the steps that I go through during break ups or letting go of a situation/friend. I hope you like the poem. :)

Images of your eyes

flash to cannibalistic vultures

feeding on the heart of their

prey.

They prey on the weak

and the broken

and sometimes even

the miserable.

You never wanted to hurt me,

but yet you continue

to be in my presence

you can hear my heart

scream,

the blood pouring like

the tears that shoot

out of my eyes.

Replicas are hard to come by,

but life has a way

of surprising 

you

you might want to

think twice

before you cross someone

who knows karate.

The world has never seemed

so big

and the people have never 

seemed so

mean

but cuts heal

and mistakes overlap with

other ones.

You once gave me a 

heartache

and now you left me

with a 

headache.

Author's Note

If you haven't noticed, the stanzas are broken into the 5 stages of "getting over a break up". Just thought that would be cool for you to know.

Reviews

[rae52]

very good it was deep and powerful :D

[Darksummerswind]

Great way you wrote the different stages and the feeling you put into it. I really like the last stanza.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

What you said in your authors note, i noticed... i love how you wrote it like that, brilliant. The stages that you go through, those emotions; very true to many. Really nie write, very awesome... i love this a lot.

[Daytonight]

I love the last stanza best! Great work!

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Break-ups are hard, especially with a person that keeps playing games with you. It's difficult, but eventually, you will be able to move on and become strong.
Nice job!

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Great construction of the posture of anger... Nice.

[Megan]

Haha NICE! I FREAKING LOVED the third stanza "you might want to/think twice/before you cross someone/who knows karate." Genius right there. I like how it this was all about someone getting over a break up and you can really see it :) this was an awesome and I really enjoyed reading it! Thanks for posting!!

[Kenneth The Poet]

The last stanza is excellent. I sometimes wonder how the fairer gender deals with those of lesser one.

Nice work

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lol LOVE THE KARATE LINE!!!!!!!!!!

[Lily Mae]

Excellent write.. and very powerful and raw..x