Suicide

My tears will continue to fall,

Yet no one will bother to help me.

My wrists will continue to bleed,

Yet no will intervene.

I am alone.

Afraid.

But mostly alone.

This will be attempt # 2

Too bad my death will only affect 

few. 

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The topic...is a touch one...yet...a the feelings are quite noted in the lines of this write...it's only when we write them down and move on...do we feel the truer nature of life...but you do give us the other-side with this write...I would go back and fix this in areas:

My tears will continue to fall,

Yet no one will bother to help me.

My wrists will continue to bleed,

Yet no will intervene.

I am alone.

Afraid.

But mostly alone.

This will be attempt # 2

Too bad my death will only affect

few.

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My tears will continue to fall,

Yet no one will bother to help me.

My wrists will continue to bleed,

Yet no one will intervene.

I am alone.

Afraid.

But mostly alone.

This will be attempt # 2

Too bad my death will only affect

a few.

[Willard Wells]

While I applaud your skills and ability to bring your pain to the page, please do not follow the thoughts as I am viewing here. Your are valuable and have much too give. So keep your pain to words and no more.