He Loves me

He Loves me

A Poem by Kasey Nichole

He Loves Me

The light blue petals
stain my fingertips as I
whisper 
"he loves me"
although I know he does 
not.

Forget-me-not petals
die at my feet 
collecting in a 
morgue
of blue death as i 
whisper 
"he loves me"
although I know he does 
not.

But love is not child's play.
Because a broken heart is
serious
it has even ended
lives
when you realize that 
"he loves me"
NOT.

- k.n.k 

© 2015 Kasey Nichole


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I don't use the words I love you lightly so that is a misconseption about men but I can sew how a lot of them now a days do use it for there own selfish reasons but I really like the the structure of your poem and the way it was protreyed.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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He loves me, he loves me not.....usually not. ( I love you )Just a three word code for some men to get a woman's kit off. Ashamedly I know

Posted 7 Years Ago


Suprb lines...touching one...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kasey Nichole

7 Years Ago

thank you!!
When the love die. Part of us die too. A sad and powerful poem dear Kasey. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Because a broken heart is
serious
it has even ended
lives
You made a great poem here, it really seems to come out of the heart.
What a poem, my favorite lines where the one that I put up there, a broken heart is really something we can't explain, make us go in a bad state too...
Well thought out poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very well done and I loved it. Great feeling and thought delivery. I looking forward to reading more of your wok.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Kasey Nichole
Kasey Nichole

Sanibel Island , FL



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