Debacle of Poetics

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Debacle of Poetics

If man searched deep within his mind

Saw future thoughts stir inside

Either reason or insanity

Imagine war, Navy bombarding

Armies advancing

Demons killing fantasies

Walk over buildings now rubble once beautiful dreams

Visions now lay opened and raw - bleeding

Inner structure bankrupt as the brain ages and dies

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning the Tovli contest! I never hear from you, so I hope you are all right. I am still recuperating from prostate-cancer surgery, but it's looking good.

Sal

[Helena]

I agree wholeheartedly with Tovli. Amazing poem to say the least!
Bravo and thank you for submitting this beauty to her Story/Poem
Ten contest! ~ Helena

[Michael X]

wow, this is an absolutely stunning, raw depiction, as your words speak to the masses
and to the indivisual at heart. excellent poem tony.