Unforgettable

contest 10/60

What do you see looking at the sky

Surface like small crystals of dust

Field on the moon sparkling

I jump when I hear the sound of music

I will dance with you for the first time

All the way until mornings light

Make tea then we will simply sleep

Waiting for dark of day and soft light of night

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

10/60 contest

Reviews

[David Keagan]

I really like this write. As writing some intimate works recently, i couldn't help but to see this in a very intimate light. I love the flow and the usage of words. awesome write brother

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congrats on winning Tovli's TEN contest!

[Tovli]

very nicely done. solid flow. tovli

[Helena]

Perfectly beautiful Tony! You have done a wonderful
job incorporating the given words.... I loved this little poem! Write on
my friend! ~ Hugs Helena

[angelina neves]

Lovely weaving with these chalanging words!