societal disorder

don't judge me.

a monster lives inside me

he makes me stick
my fingers down my throat
until i get sick

this monster promises to love me

he plays peek-a-boo in tv screens
and billboards
and magazines

i live inside a monster

whose business is quite profitable
making little girls feel uncomfortable
unlovable

Reviews

[terry smith]

heroin shiek is not so unique the dead all look like bones

[L.Edward]

The title caught my attention big time and I wasn't disappointed. A well crafted light illuminating a chronically unacknowledged social issue. I would never judge because I feel very strongly about this particular issue myself. It's a regular concearn for me. I try to keep my daughter away from TV advertising as often as possible because of this very reason. And it can be an uphill battle sometimes.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Masterfully crafted!! Your structure, flow and rhyming are exceptional, along with your well developed lines.

"a monster lives inside me

he makes me stick
my fingers down my throat
until i get sick

this monster promises to love me

he plays peek-a-boo in tv screens
and billboards
and magazines

i live inside a monster

whose business is quite profitable
making little girls feel uncomfortable
unlovable"

[Heather Hassell]

thank you so much for getting this (:

[Chaos_Collector]

Not being satisfied with ones appearance can cause one to go to take such measures. If you ever need someone to talk to, I'm here for you Heather