My heart for you

Today you told me your secrets
Today you told me of your pain
It nearly brought tears to my eyes
To hear you had been treated this way

You look down on yourself
Don't.

You are one of the strongest people
I have ever met
Even if you think you're not brave.

Today, I cried
Your pain is my pain
Your joy is my joy
My heart is your heart

You are as beautiful as the universe
You hair is Jupiter rain
Your eyes are Neptune depths
They shine with stars

To me we are galaxies
You are Milky Way
I am Andromeda
We have collided
Merged
I am a part of you now


We both think of our futures
How far they will intertwine.
I want to come home to you
Till the day I die
I want to put my ring of stardust on your finger
So the world knows your mine
I want to be that couple
That everyone knows has been together
For what seems forever
It will be forever
Our forever
Yours and mine

One day we will live together
One day we will kiss underneath the stars
One day I will marry you
One day my name will be yours
Until then
One day at a time


I love you, Kaidee.

Reviews

[Bee]

I'd melt if I was Kaidee. :P Romantic, and I love the universe part. Makes it sounds ethereal and dreamy.

[Emily]

This is beautiful and so romantic. I'm so happy that people still remember how to put feelings like this down into such well written words.

[Wondering Mind]

Lovely and tender poetic piece.

[AbbeyLyn]

I absolutely love this.
And I think deep down inside, everybody wants a love like this- it's beautiful.

[Misty Blue Eyes]

this is really beatuiful

[J. R.]

This is really romantic. It's perfectly worded to express a longing of the deepest kind.

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. amen ... it's an honour to witness such a pure and beautiful love ... may god bless you both ... and may the universe celebrate forever ... :) ...

[NovaKai]

Nadi, this made me cry. Its beautiful.
i love you so god damn much.