Dear Lucifer

Dear Lucifer

A Poem by Muse

 

 

 

 

 

I am well

 

"thank you"

 

 

You asked about the storm

All I can say is

 

 

Yes

 

 

 it still thunders...

 

 

I truly believe that when lightning strikes

it always strikes in the same place twice

There has been no rain

 

 

"to stop the fire"

Therefore

 

 

My make-believe Eden burned to the ground

 

The energy of you

 

 

 

"I still feel"

 

 

 

 when nobody's around

 

 

 

 

 

© 2014 Muse


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No rain to stop the raging inferno, yet, I rein. No thunder to chisel away at the sounds of screaming, but I scream thunderously. No relief from the pain...the misery. Yet, pain & misery are my relief.

This was something else, Muse! Ethereal, sublimely creepy...this was VERY good!

The overall presentation was astounding!

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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This is magnificent in its simplicity and profound impactful structure. Wow. I definitely am a new fan, and will be coming back again and again. I know a lot of people don't take RR's and they get lost in the shuffle. If you are so inclined PM me and I will send you links to ones you might like, I think. I have too many to sift through, I think.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Muse

9 Years Ago

I turned my RR's off a long time ago. Now I just read who I want to read. I would love it if you ema.. read more
lots of imagery in this write

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Muse

9 Years Ago

thank you..
 wordman

9 Years Ago

you are welcome
I love this kid as well. He is the peace and calm in the profound storm.

Posted 9 Years Ago


You my friend select sharp and smart Titles, as I always enjoyed your writing always a thrill and excitement...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can always pull up a chair and find a beautiful tear, and a smile, in your library. Amazing piece of a beautiful soul. Thank you so much for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Muse

10 Years Ago

think of it as a tribute to your pen name. lol
Lucifer Jones

10 Years Ago

*smile* That would be an honor... Thanks for the grins...
My make-believe Eden burned to the ground
The energy of you
"I still feel"
when nobody's around"

Very creative verse what this is and your closing is just simply brilliant...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Muse

10 Years Ago

thank you...
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I like this morbid sort of writing, I mean that as a compliment. I have always been intrigued by some of the darker insights that others may have. I really enjoyed this conversation, as if between friends.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. Stunning piece of poetry.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dean Kuch said it best. I agree.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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