Tomorrow at Two

Tomorrow at Two

A Poem by Muse
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A saucy little tonge twister..........................

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Tomorrow at two, together we'll share

 our lustful tendencies


Tender, tempestuous and tantalizing kisses


To finally taste you, time and time again with

the tickle of my tongue


Your tingling 'touches' taunt and beckon
to my desire


Tis a tedious task, to explore

this tenacious taboo


Tomorrow at two, a tumultuous thirst

shall be quenched!

© 2017 Muse


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Gosh, Dear Beth!
What a delightfully sensual romp of impending sensations your deftly intriguing scintillations of suggestive sweetness slathers our senses with … I, for one, am smitten by your spell, can't you tell as my passions swell?
Sweet picture, too, and it's a date, so don't be late, I'll pick you up and we'll consummate! ; )
I dearly love it, Beth, my favorite line:
"Tis a tedious task, to explore
this tenacious taboo" … ummm!
Got a suggestion for you to make this already amazingly rendered piece just a hair sweeter.
Without changing your count, but adding smoother punch, make it:
"Your tingling 'touches' taunt and beckon
to my desire"

Okay, I'm ducking … LOL!
You really got it going on … you so saucy-good, and sooo naughty! ⁓ Richard ; )

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Muse

3 Years Ago

Grammar and spelling are not a strong point of mine. I rather suck at it actually. I try to fake it,.. read more
Richard 🍃

3 Years Ago

Well, Beth dear,
Great correction, but what about my review,you didn't like it, or what? LOL!
Muse

3 Years Ago

My loss of words prove that my efforts are futile. In other words. I'm not worthy of your charms or .. read more



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Gosh, Dear Beth!
What a delightfully sensual romp of impending sensations your deftly intriguing scintillations of suggestive sweetness slathers our senses with … I, for one, am smitten by your spell, can't you tell as my passions swell?
Sweet picture, too, and it's a date, so don't be late, I'll pick you up and we'll consummate! ; )
I dearly love it, Beth, my favorite line:
"Tis a tedious task, to explore
this tenacious taboo" … ummm!
Got a suggestion for you to make this already amazingly rendered piece just a hair sweeter.
Without changing your count, but adding smoother punch, make it:
"Your tingling 'touches' taunt and beckon
to my desire"

Okay, I'm ducking … LOL!
You really got it going on … you so saucy-good, and sooo naughty! ⁓ Richard ; )

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Muse

3 Years Ago

Grammar and spelling are not a strong point of mine. I rather suck at it actually. I try to fake it,.. read more
Richard 🍃

3 Years Ago

Well, Beth dear,
Great correction, but what about my review,you didn't like it, or what? LOL!
Muse

3 Years Ago

My loss of words prove that my efforts are futile. In other words. I'm not worthy of your charms or .. read more
Is that 2 ur time or my time. Would hate to keep u waiting!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

smiled...then smiled again....


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Afternoon delight! I can hardly wait... ha. I wonder what poem will spawn from this trist? Well, it could go any number of ways. I hoping for the happiest of endings. :)
Fun little read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like the alliteration in this piece. it lightens the mood of the forbidden tryst, a taboo. and it must take place at two when they can get away from their normal everyday lives.despite the levity of it, it doesn't take away the subtlety of the erotica.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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How about today at two?

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Mic
Alliteration is the most pleasing hum in verse to that little ear in my mind.

'Tomorrow at two...'

Loved it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a small tongue twister with a bit of exotic sensuality...nice work

Posted 8 Years Ago


Muse

8 Years Ago

I've had my writings bashed for not being technical. There are some that think anything outside stru.. read more
Art

8 Years Ago

OH....so that's where Tinker Bell came from...
Muse

8 Years Ago

yeah they said they didn't believe in fairies...so she choked and died. :(
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MIB
Very nicely done, it is a bit tongue twisting, but the words make it so worth while. Funny I started reading this and looked at the clock, I wonder how many other people did... wish it was two o'clock now... lol Keep up the great work :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem made me realize I need to practice tongue twisters lol! So many Ts! The choice of words is great. They paint a picture in my mind of teasing flirting. Reminds me of my old crush :P

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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