Tomorrow at Two

A saucy little tonge twister..........................

Tomorrow at two, together we'll share

 our lustful tendencies

Tender, tempestuous and tantalizing kisses

To finally taste you, time and time again with

the tickle of my tongue

Your tingling 'touches' taunt and beckon
to my desire

Tis a tedious task, to explore

this tenacious taboo

Tomorrow at two, a tumultuous thirst

shall be quenched!

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Gosh, Dear Beth!
What a delightfully sensual romp of impending sensations your deftly intriguing scintillations of suggestive sweetness slathers our senses with … I, for one, am smitten by your spell, can't you tell as my passions swell?
Sweet picture, too, and it's a date, so don't be late, I'll pick you up and we'll consummate! ; )
I dearly love it, Beth, my favorite line:
"Tis a tedious task, to explore
this tenacious taboo" … ummm!
Got a suggestion for you to make this already amazingly rendered piece just a hair sweeter.
Without changing your count, but adding smoother punch, make it:
"Your tingling 'touches' taunt and beckon
to my desire"

Okay, I'm ducking … LOL!
You really got it going on … you so saucy-good, and sooo naughty! ⁓ Richard ; )

[Muse]

Grammar and spelling are not a strong point of mine. I rather suck at it actually. I try to fake it, but you still caught me in the act. Correction appreciated, it has been noted and fully utilized. ;)

[Richard🖌]

Well, Beth dear,
Great correction, but what about my review,you didn't like it, or what? LOL!

[Muse]

My loss of words prove that my efforts are futile. In other words. I'm not worthy of your charms or talent. Even my efforts to write an Alliterative poem failed. I want to write something clever, but this damn writers block has me feeling worse than tongue tied. I feel numb dumb and hum-drum. Your review was delightful, it was better than the actual poem I wrote! ha ha ha

[Robin]

tangy

[OT]

saucy indeed! and quite the tongue twister - brilliant to read out loud - "Tis a tedious task, to explore
this tenacious taboo
Tomorrow at two," - this is how sensual writing should be written! suggestive and fun! nice!

[Forest Green]

Tongue twisting taboos...! ;)

This was a challenging one to read indeed...without tripping. And I never tried it outloud...!

Nice work...!

[Allen Smuckler]

tongue twister, indeed...
A very hopeful and inspirational write...
(said a little "tongue in cheek")
allen

[bob, small b. aka invs]

nice alliteration. it looks like you had fun writing this one.

[solo2be]

Great write, very sexy.

[.]

alliteration celebration..

[augustmoon80]

Very Erotic!