Blinded

Blinded

A Poem by Muse

Just like the sun,
your smiles so bright.
Find me;
illuminate my night.
 
Overwhelmed I am,
Just a shadow; no touch.
This empty void,
at times, is just too much.
 
Like the sun,
penetrate me with life.
Rescue me;
from the internal hate,
this strife.
 
Blinded by my darkness!
 
Blinded by my
evil deeds!
 
Blinded by my
sinful needs!
 
Like the sun,
your smiles so bright.
Cure my darkness,
blind me;
with your light!

© 2014 Muse


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Well I could not put it better myself ---- I mean the positive views and opinions of so many of my reviewing predecessors ... I love your "Blinded by my
evil deeds!

Blinded by my
sinful needs!

Crammed full and overflowing with subliminally erotic messages that tantalise and tease. A real treat at breakfast time. Shame that I have to set off for the gym, but I will be back. AGT's N

Posted 11 Years Ago


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wOW ! I'm really thrilled with the way you combine image and text, this works brilliantly. . . I wonder how much better this would be for the book published , compared to this website first edition ! Bravo!

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Posted 12 Years Ago


At the very worst point.. there always will be the possibility for hope. I recall that from your poetic expression.

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Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on May 23, 2011
Last Updated on June 24, 2014
Tags: Poetry, despair, life, depression. light
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