WhiTe NoiSe

Charged by emotions...both good and bad...I've learned to embrace it all.

WhiTe

NoiSe














         

This white noise
          it is the consequence of my instability
                                I watch in wonder
                                    as many specters rise from the unearthing
           It is time now
to harvest the fruit
                                possessed by sorcery and wonder
               let go of the restraints
                              for this ordained shepherdess; labors forth a monstrosity
                                                     another hum, I feel the thrum
                                 these birthing pains are never done.


****STATIC****


             At last
                                     this energy becomes alive
                    another tainted conception made sacred
             a thousand minutes of prayer and tribulation
       the rising blackness is now one
alive and without segregation
                                   it feeds quietly upon me
                                                 with an eager predation.


****STATIC****



                   I give in
                 dissolved by the spectrum of chaos
                                                 I'm now at peace with this beautiful desolation
    defiled and deaf
                 enlightened by the carnal knowledge
                        this confusion has been gifted
                                  by the feign
                                  that's shrouded within.

Author's Note

FYI: I want to thank all my friends for the love and support they have shown my daughter. It's because she's doing well with some new medications, that I'm finally allowed to visit my home here on WC. Much luv....thank you.

Reviews

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe excuse me for a second when I saw the photo With the words white noise I thought That litlle was the poem hehe :) I find it incredible how you wrote this and even the format incredible! :) You have created a very well written and provoking Poem :) Enjoyed reading it :)

[Michael X]

Glad to here things are better, the effect of the poem is electric, I admire the sculpting of phrases, something that's unique, the meaning itself describes a lost realm of understanding, that tears the soul apart, above all your work is artistic. I really like the style, it's Wow

[J.V. Stanley]

My heart is with you my dear as well as your daughter! I've missed reading your writing so much, you truly inspire me.

This poem is beautifully written as always-I love not only the imagery but also the formatting you used, it really brought the poem to life.

I have had more than enough static in my life as of late, sometimes to the point where all I hear is white noise with the chatter and chaos of those around me. It can be insanity at times but then again, that white noise reminds me a bit of being disconnected with the world-that everything around me becomes a maelstrom of just senseless obscure noise with nothing coherent to give it substance.


it feeds quietly upon me
with an eager predation.

this line...is the story of my life.

I really need to log on more often than I have-I've missed WC so much, and your writing as well. Take care my dear and I look forward to reading more and catching up!

[Ruth]

I am so glad love! Thats awesome news :)
I can hear this spoken too! You have such a magnificent way of making a piece of poetry literally sing! Gorgeous flow love, amazing piece!
xoxo

[Kelly Scheppers]

All this truly needs is applause! Outstanding presentation...
I look forward to reading more!


My best,
Kelly

[The Analog Kid]

I like the flow and sounds that you invoke in my mind. This meandered beautifully through my consciousness:)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

the aural quality in this particular poem is absolutely spectacular~ everything connects and opens an amazing visual world for the reader~

Very nice work dear. And I am so glad she's doing better, and that they know right now what she have. About your brilliant work; "I never met an soul who can so perfectly describe noises in colours, and have such a imagery on the impossible :D even describe the sound of the color white" Then you're for sure even as me not from this earth :) The message in your words is clear, and needed. Hats off

[Art]

nice work Muse...and it is nice to hear that your daughter is doing well...your poem reflects a return or the acceptance of an energy that keeps you within the Light...it is those times when we feel or realize the grasp of a source that keeps us within a positive mood or realization to fill our needs...nicely expressed thoughts...

[Idiotekque]

Very interesting! I like your vocabulary, it definitely gets one thinking. I completely forgot that "thrum" was a word!

Really though, the flow is wonderfully varied and thought provoking. I hate predictable poetry, and I also don't like poetry that tries so hard to be "different" that it's unreadable and indulgent. You struck a nice chord between the two and definitely pulled it off. Bravo.

[Echo Nightfield]

I love the visual effects not enough people use them. I loved this masterpiece