I'm just a tin can

Author's Note

jJst something short and fun.

Reviews

[Rusty]

I absolutely love this! Personally I find the creativeness sublime. What talent to take a little can that has sat in so many lives and give it voice. The can that has held the quill of the poet who with never a thought to this faitful conveyance spills the blood of their heart across paper then callously drops the spent scribe int it.

Ah the little tin can! I just love this!

[icelandicblue]

Oh this is just lovely. You've truly taken an ordinary item and elevated its uses poetically. Just think of the things it has held! This is a wonderful poem.

[Thea]

Aw, I actually find the flow fantastic. A totally enjoyable and interesting poem. There was so much creativeness. Loved the imagery so much. It was a unique piece, to be honest. I've never read such topic from other writers. Missed your poems! Great job! :)

[Muse]

that was my aim...to take the mundane...and give it a title..a place...and a name. :)))

[Aethereal]

Now that was charming, and I loved the rhyme. I'm glad that you found me. You personified that tin can very well, and in a funny way.

[Mic]

What excellent thought...like a fall down the rabbit hole into a gold mine! So sweet off the tongue and into one's mind. Tin cans and cigar boxes have held all those things I once held most dear.

Most fun...thank you!

[Tate Morgan]

oh this was so cool Beth you outdid yourself This id frame and hang

[Muse]

thank you..it's a secret favorite of mine too. :))

[Tree]

Rhythmic and brimming with imagery and texture. And the tin can reference, the play on it. It makes this reader think of more than few ideas on how that title came into existence, I dug this.

[Holly Mason]

fun is good...especially if your a tin can*)
like the flow of your thoughts when this reads-just cute
your title choice grabbed my attention
sorry about the gum...I missed the trash
thank you for the word smile truly

[Muse]

I should have tossed the mushy pears. lol

[Avocations of Amber]

simple, but charming...... :) who would've thought that a tin can could represent so much life and motion...I the personification here is very clever

[Talal Hussain]

Amazing composition...great imagination and creativity :-)

[Muse]

thank you :))

[captain]

Your more than a thin can. I see the messy sorroundings in a fun way. :D welcome back :)