Thirst

Thirst

A Poem by Hilario Alves
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Most nights i pick up my phone and just write down what's in my head, otherwise i won't sleep no matter how hard i try.

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© 2014 Hilario Alves


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Really good poem, short and direct. Nice one

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hilario Alves

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and thank you for your kind words
This poem is achingly beautiful. For a second there I wanted to end your thirst. It was strong in it's simplicity. That's not something just any writer can achieve. I enjoyed reading this!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hilario Alves

9 Years Ago

Thank you for taking your time to read it, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Ink Seductress

9 Years Ago

It was my pleasure :)
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Added on October 6, 2014
Last Updated on October 6, 2014
Tags: thirst, love, loneliness, poem, poetry

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Hilario Alves
Hilario Alves

Nottingham, Nottinghamshire, United Kingdom



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I'm just somebody, that loves to write more..

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