Vulture

Vulture

A Poem by A.A.Romanczuk

Cracked stained glass and shards of sun

Sorrow oozes out of my crippled fingers

Concentrated life pools on the lifeless floor

I look on wrapped in a robe of apathy

I slashed myself open with the entrance of love

It now threatens to peck out my liver

© 2012 A.A.Romanczuk


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Very much enjoyed. Prometheus bound haha
There is a rock musical adaptation of it coming out this year which the legendary Serj Tankian is working on, I myself am looking forward to it...
Again great little poem with great meaning :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A.A.Romanczuk

10 Years Ago

:O That is Noteworthy news. Thank you :) as I really do love the play.
I esp like 'shards of sun' and 'concentrated life pools' . All the sibilance in the first couple of lines also sounds sharp and slashing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Imagery here is outstanding.. now time to go read that play everyone seems to know... Great write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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A.A.Romanczuk

10 Years Ago

you won't regret it when you do :D
ok pretty good well written and so full of emotion excellent

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the promethius reference at the end. Did I spell that right?

Posted 10 Years Ago


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A.A.Romanczuk

10 Years Ago

Prometheus :) Thanks :)
Prometheus bound...

Posted 10 Years Ago


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A.A.Romanczuk

10 Years Ago

it's one of my favorite plays :)
Marie

10 Years Ago

I could see the play immediately in your poem.
A.A.Romanczuk

10 Years Ago

Thank you for this
Very intense, very nice write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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