The Last Minute God and Devil

The Last Minute God and Devil

A Story by Brittany

They say that people sometimes in their last minutes become religious. That right before they die, they see the light of Heaven and they hear God. That no matter the circumstance of death, no matter how drawn out or fast it was, the last few seconds were filled with flashing moments from your life and a clear set realization that God will forgive all and you are His child.

They say that people sometimes in their last minutes become religious. I became religious watching another’s death. You see, as I watched the light dim from her eyes I suddenly believed in a Hell and I knew it existed. I knew it was real and alive with all of its demons and sins; its torture. That it was here, right here, right now.

© 2011 Brittany


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i really liked this. it was very well written. keep it up :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


it was a nice way how you expressed yourself :) u need to work a little on choosing that the write vocabulary ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on September 28, 2011
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