first step

first step

A Poem by hiraethstill
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As with most of my poetry, a catalogue of thought.

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i don't know
if this is a poem
or a silent screaming plea
freed
through fingers
and not lips

© 2020 hiraethstill


Author's Note

hiraethstill
I'm really not looking to be reviewed as a form of critique. I just wanted a place to scream into the void, somewhere to put all the thoughts bursting inside at the seams.

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i love this, short and sweet yet super relatable.

Posted 1 Week Ago


I like your statement about you don't looking for critique. Sometimes people get too serious here. Anyway I like your thoughts blended into free verses of no particular meaning. There is no any need for improvement cause it's perfect how is it.

Posted 1 Week Ago



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Added on May 22, 2020
Last Updated on May 22, 2020
Tags: nonsense, thoughts, brain dump, mental health

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An old soul, and probably the biggest dork you'll ever meet. Helping people and doing my best to make them feel accepted and cared for is why I was put on this earth. If I can do something for someone.. more..

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