The worst dream

She was laying there in pain

Dying slowly

Me and my cousin

Were the only ones there

Everyone else abandoned her

We held her hands

And stayed strong for her

When she finally left us

We broke down

And cried forever it seemed

Then we heard a cruel laugh

And standing in the corner

Stood the two of you

Holding a jar

And in that jar was my grandmothers soul

You smashed it on the ground

And her soul flew upwards

You tried to catch it

To kill it

But she was on her way

Author's Note

This dream woke me up sobbing, and I called up my grandma the second the sun was up

Reviews

[Rose Masen]

Wow. I'm speechless. This is painful. Yet beautifully written.

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

WOW This poem was scary..... It gave me the shivers...... You did a great job describing it too, really scared the H H double hocky stick out of me Great job

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Wow im still not to sure what to think.
This sure would frighten me as well, I would be worried all night if I had this same dream.
Great work.

[SOUL LESS]

What a nightmare! When i was reading the poem, i wondered how you made up the end. It was so awesomely unique.

[Raindrop]

amazing....good thing it was only a dream :(

[Millie]

I was so very close to cry reading this..... its amazing.xxx

[astoundinglyattractive]

god, that is ad. i don't cry like ver, but i almost did just now. okay. i am crying. god, if this happened to me.......
100/100~