What you don't know

What you don't know

A Poem by Call Me Blu

You'll never know

How much you hurt me

Doing what you did

Thought you were being brave

Look at where it's lead

I still like

        love him

But you got to him first

Now I cry empty tears

That will never

Quenche my sorrows thirst

Watching you two laugh

Is like twisting the knife deeper

There are other fish in the sea

But they all swim right by me

He was the only one

I ever had a chance at

But so did you

Now look at me

I've gone and fallen flat

No, you will never know

How much it aches

To see you standing there

Next to the jewel I let you take

 

© 2011 Call Me Blu


Author's Note

Call Me Blu
Ya, it's partially my fault. But that doesn't keep it from hurting.

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Sometimes other people don't know what a hurt one feel, cause they're in their happy mood, and they forgot everything, so, keep yourself up! Even it maybe some of your fault, you maybe need to talk to them, no matter what.
I like the strong feeling/emotions in your writing! A very good write!
~CyndiR

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Awww!! This is quite depressing.. xD but its a very good write. I love it. So much pain overwhelms this piece. Its deep. I can relate to this one very well. And it strikes my heart right at the core. This reminds me of a guy I loved so much in my senior year of high school.. but i was stupid to let him go when I was crazy for him. I wanted him and i knew there was feelings for me too but I was the one who hurt him by trying to push him away and he got another girl... it does hurt seeing the guy you love with another girl when you're still madly in love with him. It is EXCRUCIATING...

Great write! This is amazing! The feelings are so well penned.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sometimes other people don't know what a hurt one feel, cause they're in their happy mood, and they forgot everything, so, keep yourself up! Even it maybe some of your fault, you maybe need to talk to them, no matter what.
I like the strong feeling/emotions in your writing! A very good write!
~CyndiR

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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