A Poem by Call Me Blu

Excuse me if I lose you
But you've got my mind in a whirl
You show that smile and I know
I wanna be your girl
I want you to see me
And feel the same
And I know if you ask
My whole life will change
Instead of feeling down
I and hiding my face when you're around
I will feel beautiful
For the first time in forever
I will feel truly happy
For the first time in never
And I know
That if you say I am
Then I'll believe you
But there is nothing I can do
So I'll keep feeling down
Keep seeing you around
Until you tell me
I am

© 2011 Call Me Blu

Author's Note

Call Me Blu
Imagine this sung to a happy tune.

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Tears are in my eyes...... 'sniff'

Posted 8 Years Ago

i really liked the way you wrapped it up with the title, very good job :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

Quite nice and cute and yet really sad and deep of emotion... really good write, i enjoyed it, really like it.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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This was pretty cute. What I liked about this poem was that it flowed especially well. A lot of poems I read always have this kind of forced flow whereas this feels very natural. I felt that the theme was pretty aboveboard in the method it was stated. Also, it's nice how you got up and personal using "I" rather than going from an abstract or passive voice perspective. Good job!

Posted 8 Years Ago

aww that was great!! thats how felt but he did say i was when i didnt exspect it

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on July 28, 2011
Last Updated on July 28, 2011


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